April

Her heart beats to my every touch

Her smile makes my butterflies flutter

The oceans waves crash into the earth's sands 

As we crash against the bed, fingers laced together

Night stars twinkle 

Her body rises to my fingers traces 

Bumps of panting and shivers run through her skin

Heat flows through my lips

Electricity radiating through our finger tips 

Winds of passion cry out in her pleasure

Whirling around us, enclosed to the nights seductiveness 

Caged and chained to the lovers dance

waking in the Sun's smiles 

She's next to me, living in dreams of fantasy 

hair fallen from the heat and passion of the night before 

My world is complete

shes laying next to me in my arms.

 

Reviews

[Nothing Personal]

a perfect work of passion.
"The oceans waves crash into the earth's sands
As we crash against the bed" was a smasher line to sum up the effects of converging on to your lover..Heat and electric references make it all the more steamy..Good job !! quite liked it..

[Jonathan De Elvira]

You took my breath away with this one and you made this poem very seductive yet full of gentleness and it flows so well in life stream. My god you're very talented my friend. So talented and don't you ever forget that and abandon this gift of yours.

Despite of the subject in this writing, you managed to made this sound angelic and so innocent even when it's clearly tempting.

[State of Grace]

aaww so passionate! loved it!

[Matthew Kult]

Passion is itself an inspiration. Excellent flow, excellent structure.

There is nothing more beautiful than having the passion, love, and thrill than being with a lover. To feel their warmth to taste them, hold them....to just be in their presense.

Regards,

Matthew

[Hello, Goodbye]

very curiously mentally stimulating..

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Reminicing of better days, and I thank you sir.

[Jonathan]

Well written piece of work accompanied by such passion
And intimate feeling fueling the poem to its beautiful ending
Once again good job

[Stef Outsiders]

Ah.. passion oozed from this... very well written!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very romantic and sensously done!

[KAREN]

Beautiful and sexy and romantiic and passionate!!!!!!

[sarah]

oooo this is so wonderful! I love the feel of it the emotions it is just one great poem!