I am one

I am one

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

He has come for me today
It is my time to say good bye,
But not for long you see. 
It is never for very long that we say goodbye. 

He stands by me as i take my last breath as we know it
My smile always with you, my heart beats slow 
My fluttering eyes no longer open

He takes my hand now,
Guiding me to a new place
it's a place i have never seen before, high above the living
i am as one should be

In the after life i am told, 
There are no rules but 1. 
watch over the ones that you love
Make their life happy with thoughts of you

God has taken me now. 
It is my sworn duty to follow him, 
As he will now show me the light in the distance.
i am free now, my spirit to go where ever it feels. 

i am here with you as the days go on 
Minds are filled with memories of me. 

god... he has come for me. holding your hand
i must leave now. don't let the flood gates come yet
as only happy thoughts of me are filled in your head.

© 2011 Misty Blue Eyes


Author's Note

Misty Blue Eyes
my grandfather in law just passed away, this is for you Roger

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Obviously extremely touching and full of grey symbols.
That's not what jumped out though. I tend to dig deep but the fact that he was God in the second to last stanza and 'god' in the last stanza where you are WITH him shows a casual stance on the one who is called I am.

Nice work

Posted 13 Years Ago


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beautiful..your imagery is magical..I am sure he is better off than us :)

Posted 13 Years Ago



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