What If

What if

I 

could 

kiss you

What if

You

could 

feel 

me?

What if

The 

Night 

Never

Ended?

What if

time 

stopped

and

we 

could

stay 

like 

this

What if

When 

we 

met

life 

stopped?

What if

you

never 

died?

Never 

got 

hit 

by

that 

car!

What if

I 

still

had

you......

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Words that is deep, the poem has sad emotion running through it, love the set up!

[KAREN]

I loved the way this is set up. Now having said that, I thought it, this was so sad and full of expressed emotions.

[Tate Morgan]

The road not taken is full to the rim with regret.But it wastes our years to worry on the past Best to learn from it and look to the future.I think we all try not to dwell on these thoughts they bring out guilt and blame.

[Coyote Poetry]

The what if's would drive us mad. We can't worry about the possibilities. We must live for the moment. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Zackery Alan Daley]

This reminds me of when I was in...well it was like i was in heat, not love. For three years, i THOUGHT a lie. The four letter lie.

I appreciated the stanzas and the way you wrote this. Bravo.

[Joy]

This is lovely, and very poigniant. What if indeed!