What If

What if

I 

could 

kiss you

What if

You

could 

feel 

me?

What if

The 

Night 

Never

Ended?

What if

time 

stopped

and

we 

could

stay 

like 

this

What if

When 

we 

met

life 

stopped?

What if

you

never 

died?

Never 

got 

hit 

by

that 

car!

What if

I 

still

had

you......

Reviews

[J.M]

An ending I didn't see coming, in an original format and full of that almost heartbroken questioning - a brilliant write.

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what a sad ending..don't we all things of the choices we make and things that happen..and think what if..lovely but sad

[JanieB]

oh, so very sad. Good write.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this hits way too close to home....
amazing! i love this!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Great work...at first it seems almost dreamy, whispy, then it turns somber. nicely done!

[Nothing Personal]

Is it inspired by the movie " If only" . Beautiful, I love all the what if's and am particularly curious about the fourth stanza..Say even for a year ..Great poem..Leads to some real philosophical questions and some deep, somber love song..Great as ever..

[Color of the Iris]

I agree with Kelley... there is always a "what if?" but that's just how life is... we don't know so the human mind can't help but to think "what if?" Great job, I loved it! 100/100

[Kelley]

Theres always a what if.......
I liked this poem thanks for sharing.

Kelley

[Moflo]

Yes I gotta agree, the set up is very nicely done. It almost shows the narrator struggling for words to talk about such a tragedy.

[E.H. Monroe]

The set up reads like choked words through tears.

Nice set up