You Can Never

You can never....

Touch me like you use to

Give tender kisses like i liked

You can never......

Hold me in those strong protective arms

Cook those wonderful meals

Make me smile for hours on end 

You can never.....

take me by the hand and walk down the street with me

Stand at the door and hand me flowers

Wake up next to me and watch me sleep 

You can never.....

Tell me how much you love me

You can't make my heart feel better

You can wipe away my tears that fall for you

You can never.....

Love me 

Hate me

Smile at me

Hold me

Call me

You can never...... because you never were

Author's Note

You can Never... A fantasy of someone who was never really there, the mind can play nasty tricks on you.

Reviews

[Jonathan]

The ending made the rest of the poem
That much more enjoyable. It was very well
Thought of great imagination.

[floarealbastra10]

beautifuly written

[OT]

this was really good!! I quite liked the almost twist at the end!! the lead up to it made me think you'd say - because we're through or something, but then you completely flip it, which makes us wonder - was this all in their mind, or was this the ideals they hoped for from a partner but never got!! nice!!

[JanieB]

Love to know your thought process behind this poem?
I like the way you have written it..good job.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Love it! The ending was so strong! Great write!

[Dream Weaver]

“You can never” not see how fantastic this write is.
Incredible poem!

[KAREN]

Deep and powerful write. They can't do what they have never done in the first place. excellent write!

[Tate Morgan]

I wish these had a authors note to them I cant quite understand the context because I don't know the incident that precipitated it I think it is written well I wish I knew to whom

[Zackery Alan Daley]

Makes me reminisce on better days, which ironically is considered both sad and great depending on the person's opinion and/or moods. Well done

[kayleighrenee]

I seriously love this.