Watch Out!!

Here she comes!

Anger boiling within

Forced to seize 

behind her i stand

not full with in her body

Watch Out!

fists curved 

ready at will,

Succumbed tears

Free falling into lava

I cant hold her!

here she comes!

frightened children 

Watch out!!

Exploded steam 

out bursts of blood 

Watch out here she comes

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

interesting... i like it

[.]

she's scary! Nicely built..

[Geralyn Miller]

Self control is a learned skill. I know, I had a rough time learning it.
Nice piece.

[Kelsie Eileen Stark]

This is cute~

[Tate Morgan]

Could this be the alter ego getting out

[Jonathan]

Haha it seems as though you are describing your
First fight and the overwhelming feelings inside.
Gettting ready to burst, but doing your best to hold
Back but it does not work "watch out here she comes"

[silver threaded queen]

i liked the emotion you put in poem, great job

[KAREN]

You can feel the panic reading this! Nice!!

[{K}]

:'(
Frightened children......so sad. Very strong.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Scary, powerful, agresive, good!