Watch Out!!

Here she comes!

Anger boiling within

Forced to seize 

behind her i stand

not full with in her body

Watch Out!

fists curved 

ready at will,

Succumbed tears

Free falling into lava

I cant hold her!

here she comes!

frightened children 

Watch out!!

Exploded steam 

out bursts of blood 

Watch out here she comes

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh great expression of anger and passion! I loved the way you write, strong and emphasizyng.

[Blake Q Hatfield]

A vivid description of exploding rage. Well done.

[Graceful]

nice.

[Dark Empress]

Neat!

[Mauricio Montoya]

I think we all can get to that point where the rage can override our judgment; it’s our actions we have to watch out for especially if they harm others..
Excellent write.

[Dream Weaver]

A chilling description of rage boiling over…

[Cassiopia Summers]

Different. This is a good poem. (:

Interesting.
Strong.
I like it!
I also like the title. (:

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Wow this is really a strong poem love it.

[sarah]

very interesting