The steps he takes

He's mad now

She hears his foot steps

huddles to her self in the dark

 

no one to hear her pleas to be saved

pulled from the darkness

Yanked up and thrown

screams and cries are no longer heard

Broken bones no longer cared for

 

He stands there smiling down

She no longer breaths

blood dripping onto the floor

her head rested peacefully on her bruised arm

 

hearts of pain stops

veins of scared stop flowing

brain of fear and eyes of fragile freeze

 

No one to fear those foot steps he takes

pounding down with each he places down on this earth

 

 

 

Reviews

[sarah]

WOW! scary but wonderfully written

[KAREN]

very powerful poem! Good job!!

[MuSe Ampoule]

It's a wonder that people can survive abusive spouses/partners. Powerful piece.

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Very TENSE poem! sad that alot goes through that in life! you expressed this poem with deep true meaning!

[Anna]

Oh nice a poem I would write but a little difrently. Great Job I love it!
100/100

[Wondering Mind]

it must be a scary, sad.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very frightening, very sad. but i agree, it is well written.

[JanieB]

Oh boy.. scary.
Well written.