The steps he takes

He's mad now

She hears his foot steps

huddles to her self in the dark

 

no one to hear her pleas to be saved

pulled from the darkness

Yanked up and thrown

screams and cries are no longer heard

Broken bones no longer cared for

 

He stands there smiling down

She no longer breaths

blood dripping onto the floor

her head rested peacefully on her bruised arm

 

hearts of pain stops

veins of scared stop flowing

brain of fear and eyes of fragile freeze

 

No one to fear those foot steps he takes

pounding down with each he places down on this earth

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I`m amazed from the end, which is so related to the titel! also from the way you describe all without sound, like a frozen picture, in silence, everything was done so fast in front of my eyes, I didn`t have time to be scared, but mostly surprised!
very nice...

[r]

O.O HOLY HELL. THAT IS AMAZING.

its...jsut...so vivid. and breathtaking. and infuriating. stupid murderer guy...should be killed himself. this is sad. i love it. i love the ending "pounding down with each he places down on this earth". i love the imagery in this...creates a scary picture.

beautifully written, no matter how horrifying

[Blake Q Hatfield]

Very intense piece. It's sad that many times it's the villain that lives on for another day in life. This was a very vivid representation of that. Thanks for sharing.

[lavina k.]

A beautiful and a sad piece of your work!!!!!

[Graceful]

creepy...

[YouoweYoupay]

This was painful to read, but I thought it demonstrated the peace of departing life through very good images. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing.

[Cafe Reader]

Very strong writing!

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

terrifying~vividly written~ one can almost hear the thundering heartbeat of terror~

[Coyote Poetry]

A powerful poem. I could feel the fear in your words. Easy for someone to get twisted and lost when they see no escape or freedom. A sad ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[Light]

beautiful! one of the more weighty writes that i've read in a while. i can't pretend to know the pain of being in an abusive relationship; this was very heart wrenching, though!

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