a present

a present

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

Wrapped in pretty metalic paper

A perfect square box

sits in the middle of a dark room

Theres a little girl sitting in a closet

never knowing

this one present will change her

The whole out look on life

But she wont open the door to look

 

Inside this box

is a.....

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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Wow this poem kepts you on the edge nice job.

~SK

Posted 13 Years Ago
What's inside the box ???? x_x

Posted 13 Years Ago
I am confused

Posted 13 Years Ago
Great writing, but i is confused

Posted 13 Years Ago
Ahhhhh!!! Is a what???? :D

Posted 13 Years Ago
I liked this poem!! Leaves you something to think about and wanting more!!!!

Posted 13 Years Ago
i love how you turn everyday things into awesome poems. you have a talent for that for sure

Posted 13 Years Ago
What is it, what is it?? (:

Posted 13 Years Ago
Huh imtresting..
Overall very well writen.

Posted 13 Years Ago
what is it?!?!? lol i loved it:D

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Misty Blue Eyes
Misty Blue Eyes

denver, CO



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