The Rose Of Life

The rose of life

raises its head

opening its heart

waving with smiles

 

The rose of life

never knows no hurt

only warmth

Gven to others

 

The rose of life

petals of perfume

close at the sight of shadows

 

The rose of life

lay on the bed

torn apart for others pleasure

 

The rose of life.....

cut from it's being

Thorns cut deep

Puncturing holes 

into the lives

 

The rose of life

wilts and bends to the becoming fo death

 

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

I llove it! Rose of life you describe so beautiful and precise, its precious, but also it`s connected with the side of the shadows, with the death...But I wish it always stays Rose of life!

[Graceful]

very good. loved it. short and simple. bravo!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Simple but powerful love it.

~SK

[YouoweYoupay]

Simply beautiful.

[sarah]

I love this amazing job!

[Mauricio Montoya]

The rose symbolize many things in life as in death. Excellent write.

[cassandra violet]

what a unique metaphor for love. While I personally prefer a happier ending for love I can appreciate this poem's language and the thoughts that went behind it. very beautiful :)

[KAREN]

Happy and alittle sad but beautiful poem!

[JanieB]

This is lovely.

[Adrien Hupp]

It's a beautiful poem i love it:D keep writing:D