I called to him

I woke up this morning

4 am

can't sleep

can't close my eyes

Movement is impossible

 

He came this morning

He said he would

He stood there

Eyes pitch black

Light faded and hidden

 

 

the only way i know of him

Screams of damnation

Hollar from within

Caped hood velvet hands

Stretch out for me

 

An eternal life of exile to the core of hell

Torn pieces of heart leave the trail i once lived

The bloody blade that made him come

Dripping off the corner of death

 

That call on the other end of static

Nothingness of fire and death

 

 

 

 

Reviews

[r]

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I am amazed!! ZOMG!!! This is so dark and I got chills from reading it! It's so vivid and ...*shiver* frightening. Very well done. I love this part:

"An eternal life of exile to the core of hell
Torn pieces of heart leave the trail i once lived
The bloody blade that made him come
Dripping off the corner of death"

It's just so amazing, the way you describe the trail of torn heart pieces. It's just....awesome. (: I love it.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Dark writing is my forte. It's my favorite thing, and I enjoy seeing what people can come up with, and this is an amazing write.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very captivating and dark, something i really enjoy- it makes good writing, sparks creativity to think dark.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

so expressive and dark...I like it!

[Morgan]

Your VERY good writer, I like this poem much!

[Adrien Hupp]

i love the flow of this poem:) great job:D

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Wow! This was so good!!