Do You?

Do you see?

that im gifted in many ways

Do you know?

how i see in a different light

Do you understand?

that my mind is a maze

Do you care?'

that my love goes into the depths

Do you wonder?

what my ears hear

Do you have eyes?

see when im hurt

Do you remember?

how deeply i love you

Reviews

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

nice good job..

~SK

[SpokenWord]

Why must we ask these questions I have to wonder? almost reminding someone of something good and valued that they once treasured. I like the direct questions here it shows strength and confidence with a little determination.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Short and to the point. Good one.

[Cafe Reader]

Great writing!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Great display of the need for acknowledgment, approval, and inclusion. In love and in life it's such a base human need, but so often goes unmet. Great job here.

[JanieB]

I agree with Silent Scream. Well done.

[Dream Weaver]

The shame of it is, in relationships some become
blind and impervious to what once was the obvious...
nicely done..

[Wondering Mind]

Do you?
I hope the "you" intended does

[Coyote Poetry]

Love need to be re-assured. It maybe with a surprise day or gift. Your question are normal for a young heart. Love is a gift to be shared and re-affirmed as often as possible. Like a child who needs a hug and a kiss. They need proof of love and being special. A outstanding poem. I like it all.
Coyote

[Anna]

Very intresting. And I think you want to be seen.