Once More for a dead rose

Once more dead rose

as i hold you 

Bleed in my hand

Once more dead rose 

shine like you use to in the bright world

Once more dead rose 

repair my torn heart

sew it stitch by stitch

Once more dead rose

tell me i'll survive 

the blow to my mind

to my heart

Once more dead rose

pull out the rain and grow again

Make me smile

In the gardens of hope

that once lingered

Once more dead rose

give your life to another

watching you wither away is not pleasing

Once more dead rose

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this is so dark but beautiful! what a creative description! this is really awesome!

[Light]

once more dead rose! what a beautiful write! so much life and beauty stemming from your dead rose. such a small, withering, lovely thing overflowing with beauty; dead but still giving life!

[Wondering Mind]

this is a deep one. I like. Well done

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

wow girl you got talent pure talent good job..

~Sk

[Morgan]

:) ur a really good writer

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Title brought me to the poem. I like the vision you create with your words. Roses can mean many things. Your meaning isn't a story with a good ending. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Adrien Hupp]

lol that's my name!!!! but i really love it:)

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is this written as a song? I flows like a song..the metaphor with the dead rose is strong image and made stronger as you repeat it..nice.