Once More for a dead rose

Once more dead rose

as i hold you 

Bleed in my hand

Once more dead rose 

shine like you use to in the bright world

Once more dead rose 

repair my torn heart

sew it stitch by stitch

Once more dead rose

tell me i'll survive 

the blow to my mind

to my heart

Once more dead rose

pull out the rain and grow again

Make me smile

In the gardens of hope

that once lingered

Once more dead rose

give your life to another

watching you wither away is not pleasing

Once more dead rose

Reviews

[J.M]

Love the repetition and the imagery and just generally everything about it. Not the kind of poem about which one could change anything. Nice work!

[Cassiopia Summers]

I love the repitions of "Once more dead rose"

[Wolf]

nice write

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work.

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful in all its contours~

[Color of the Iris]

Aww, it was sad, but happy... I enjoyed reading this because I've felt this way before, and I understand where you are coming from. Good job, this poem was great.

[JanieB]

I like this..quite calming in a strange way.

[Aven]

a truly melancholic piece...

[Dream Weaver]

A very murky yet enchanting piece.

[sarah]

I love roses!