only 7

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

She lays so still

In her new bed

Forever resting

Never waking

Tears flood

 

Her pale face

Makeup applied

Hair smoothed

Eyes closed

 

The marks covered

No signs of beatings

She shall not suffer

 

A mothers blank face

Sat so still

Stares of hate

Tention gripping the room

 

The angels will take her

Free her from all

Play with her

On the clouds

 

Sweet angel

Of only 7

Please have no fear

Don't hide

you wont cry again

 

You're set free

 

 

 

Author's Note

this is based on true events from the news..... but it has never happened to me

Reviews

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

wow you did such a great job in putting it in to a poem. This poem made me cry.. Good job..

~SK

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is a great piece. Touching and gentle.

[JanieB]

Oh my goodness... Heart wrenching stuff.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Life always leaves us with the question of events that happen with out fully understanding why, well done on a very touching piece.

[Cafe Reader]

Good writing. Very touching.

[TAO]

WEll, Blue Misty Eyes... This is not to say your other work is bad, but this one... Very well done. Impressive. Heartbreaking to the core. Unfortunate...touching.

[Graceful]

oh my gosh that is so sad.

[Morgan]

Very Wonderful Poem I Enjoy It, Though Very Sad It Is Indeed

[Coyote Poetry]

My sister lost her nine year old daughter. Whole family fell apart with her. A poor mother to lose her baby girl would brake her heart forever. A very sad poem. Ain't no words that could peace to a mother. A powerful poem.
Coyote

[Marty]

wow, very deep! i can only imagine