A crush

A crush

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes
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a story about a boy i had a crush on for 9 years

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You were breath taking

We were only 7 yeard old

I knew i had no chance

You would never talk to me

 

Day by day i had to see you

Even if you weren't home

I would always go out to the park

Waiting for you...

 

The most hottest guy i had EVER seen

Years passed we got older

You knew i had a crush on you

 

I was young and wanted you to want me

I would do anything you would ask

You asked

I was your toy

I was your expirement in a box

You used me to do things to you

 

 

I was scared

I had a crush on you

you played with my mind

It was ok for you to do this

 

I'd do anything for you

I wanted you to like me

Only thing was

you did like me

 

More of a sister then anything

you were just seeing if you could get away

Away with touching me to see if i would tell

I could never do that to you

 

My senior year

I woke up out of the fog

It was clear to me

Even after all those years

 

I no longer liked you!!

 

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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i love it

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice one to describe your past crushes, actually your first one but it never happened to me like, like so mad to watch him daily like this.
:)
a great one one...nicely said!!!!

Posted 14 Years Ago


unlike love, infatuation needs a diet

Posted 14 Years Ago


Guys suck!! well...a lot of them do at least. Good poem I hate crushes they are stressful!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Yes, a crush is like a cloud that fogs our brain! At least you finally saw the truth. Nicely written...a lot of girls I'm sure have been in a similar situation.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Deviant little boys minds. Grrr.

Posted 14 Years Ago


no its not love at all. thats for sure

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Sometimes a crush which is such an intense feeling, clouds our judgment...it's not love..

Posted 14 Years Ago



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