A crush

a story about a boy i had a crush on for 9 years

You were breath taking

We were only 7 yeard old

I knew i had no chance

You would never talk to me

 

Day by day i had to see you

Even if you weren't home

I would always go out to the park

Waiting for you...

 

The most hottest guy i had EVER seen

Years passed we got older

You knew i had a crush on you

 

I was young and wanted you to want me

I would do anything you would ask

You asked

I was your toy

I was your expirement in a box

You used me to do things to you

 

 

I was scared

I had a crush on you

you played with my mind

It was ok for you to do this

 

I'd do anything for you

I wanted you to like me

Only thing was

you did like me

 

More of a sister then anything

you were just seeing if you could get away

Away with touching me to see if i would tell

I could never do that to you

 

My senior year

I woke up out of the fog

It was clear to me

Even after all those years

 

I no longer liked you!!

 

Reviews

[Ted Lambert]

ahhhh, high school.

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work.

[Mauricio Montoya]

nice work.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Provoked memories about childhood and the past...

[Graceful]

hahaha soooooooo true! well done!

[Coyote Poetry]

Life can put us in bad situations. Caring for someone allow them to control and abuse. They are not very nice people to take advantage. Life is many lessons. Some are learn with age and life. I like the end result. He lost a good friend. A powerful story.
Coyote

[SilentDreamer]

What a horrible situation. It's true infactuation and liking someone can make you blind to things that are so obvoius when you're thinking normally.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

very interesting :)

[MuSe Ampoule]

telling....young love gone in a burst of a bubble...but it was one sided and never really existed. Good job!

[Nobody.]

good write.