Hold me

Hold me when i get scared

Hold me when i have a fear

Hold me when you are sad

Hold me when you need me most

Hold me at night or in the day

Hold me because you want to

Hold me when i cry

Hold me when i am happy

Hold me just because you love me

Reviews

[Dream Weaver]

Lot's of hold me's which BTW isn't a bad thing, nice write!

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Truly blessed in talent, wording is shocking for something so sweet and a classic imagery that jumps off the screen, well done

[Chris]

Interesting, I like how you kept the theme throughout.
The simplicity worked quite perfectly.

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how sweet :)

[KAREN]

Heartfelt and beautiful!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Beautiful and breathtaking!

[Moflo]

Very sincere and heartfelt. I like both the structure of it and the way you ended it a lot.

[Suranshee]

cute n sweet poem....

[HopelesslyDevoted]

so cute!

[BriAnna Wyble]

this is beautiful. i love the longing that is portrayed in this piece! excellent job