Gone too soon

It's not fair

you were taken too soon

You were wanted here with your family

You were all Claire had

The only Blood she had

It's not fair

you aren't in a better place

Your place was here

No reason to be on the floor

Not breathing

The screaming never stops

You had everything laid out in front of you

You worked hard

You were going to college

You had so much TIM

But

You are truly missed

Author's Note

my friends brother was found dead in his bedroom on my 23 birthday...He was 19 years old. the morgue never found anything to suggest why he passed away. he was use to waking up on the floor like that some times but when they couldn't wake him.....

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

oh no.... thats horrible. so this was only three years ago, that must have been very hard on everyone. :(
i can feel the emotion for sure in this writing, i can feel the frustration of losing someone when they were just getting started on life.... i'm so sorry

[MuSe Ampoule]

How very sad. : ( The poem shows the loss you feel. It touched me. Very good write.

[JanieB]

Oh god bless u x