Gone too soon

It's not fair

you were taken too soon

You were wanted here with your family

You were all Claire had

The only Blood she had

It's not fair

you aren't in a better place

Your place was here

No reason to be on the floor

Not breathing

The screaming never stops

You had everything laid out in front of you

You worked hard

You were going to college

You had so much TIM

But

You are truly missed

Author's Note

my friends brother was found dead in his bedroom on my 23 birthday...He was 19 years old. the morgue never found anything to suggest why he passed away. he was use to waking up on the floor like that some times but when they couldn't wake him.....

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Poems that come from the heart, as well as with truth in their origins are always easier for people to connect with. I feel your pain as well as understand the pain. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with your words. I wrote a poem with a similar line.
"you aren't in a better place
Your place was here"
Losing someone who is young and life had just began. Breaks many hearts. A powerful and sad poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Mauricio Montoya]

My heart goes out to you. Thank you for sharing.

[Graceful]

oh my gosh! I'm sooooo sorry!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh, thats so very sad, tragical story!

[Wondering Mind]

very sad

[sarah]

it is so sad to lose someone so young and with a future those kind of things are never easy and can't be explained

[TAO]

Heartbreaking. You exude the sadness that you all must have felt. This is powerful, tragic, and still beautifully written.

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Wow this poem was very sad i can relate to that i can.. i am sorry for your loss..

~SK

[Misty Blue Eyes]

i was 8 months pregnant and couldnt go to Denver to console my friend.. i felt like i had let her down in the biggest way...