the outside world

the outside world

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes
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at my In laws and was going through everything i was seeing from the dinning room.. i hope you like it

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The soft rolling hills

seen from the window

Wind blown trees

cars parked

houses in silence

Sun peers his head out

into the chilly air

not sure if he wants to come out

Mist rolls in slightly, treading carefully

 

birds sing their morning song

chattering heard in their songs from the trees

as its so cold and not yet warm the are

Horses let out of barnes into fields of dreams

Clocks singing their lovely tune every hour

dark is the house but light is the outside world

 

Looking out from the dinning room table

Watching the sleet come down, trying to turn to snow

dark grey clouds cover the sky..

 

So it has happened....

The first snow has fallen...

 

 

 

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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!!!!!! im to in love with this poem im speechless(:

Posted 14 Years Ago


such a soothing poem. i love reading about nature... i think nature and music have always seemed like two of the most peaceful things in the world to read about. lovely!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wonderful landscape view and so special words like real picture..
Beautiful !

Posted 14 Years Ago


great

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow... a very observant eye... together these glimpses form a picture of your view of the world from where you're sitting... very interesting, very emotive, a bit depressing, but a very good write!

Posted 14 Years Ago


i like this this is so one of my favorites... Nice job...

~SK

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Misty Blue Eyes
Misty Blue Eyes

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