My Reflection no more

MY REFLECTION!

disappearing as I stand there

The mirror never moves

Slowly slipping 

I am fading away

In a life lived

no longer needed

Wanted less and less

My values no longer yearned for

I am slipping away

like a ghost in a movie

slowly being spread apart by the wind

NOT YET! i cry out

i am not done here

Holding my hand out, reaching

never touching......

MY REFLECTION.....GONE

Reviews

[Peter Green]

How often do we feel invisible? You just want to give people a shake...but they have no idea you are there...That's what it must be like at that first moment of death....you can see them...they can't see you....how sorrowful that must be...that's how this makes me feel...full of sorrow and sadness...watching your reflection fade away...watching your life fade away...you try to hang on...kicknig and screaming...but no one notices...then you are gone...This is great! Thank you...

[YouoweYoupay]

This is sad. I've felt this way before. and I still sometimes. The pointlessness of one's existance. I wish you a brighter, more meanigful morning. Good poem, keep it up.

[Mauricio Montoya]

Nice work, well done.

[My Fair Lady]

This can be interpreted in many ways I think, but what I feel from this is the pleading to be appreciated and noticed for the things you do. To feel special and beautiful, and not just a nameless, worker, but a wife and mother, a lover and friend. Maybe I'm wrong.. but that is what I get. Thanks.

[Dark Empress]

Nice, very good reflection on someone feeling invisible. Great write

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we often feel like noone can see us..strong emotional poem

[Britny_ Grady]

Beautiful, feeling invisible is something I understand - reaching out and wanting to see something real but not being able to find that something or someone. Love it...

[MuSe Ampoule]

I can feel/see a someone reaching out when I read this. Very good!

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Oh thats really great! I love this mystery and sense in it...So Nice!

[Shawn Killian]

Jeez i think i'm in love. This is really good. All your stuff is good. Hit me up when you write something new.