you pick it up

you pick it up

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

I'm standing here
picking up my heart

THE ONE YOU SHATTERED
with the ax of ice and hate

My heart lays there, 
so many pieces

piece by piece 
it goes into a jar

Why did i let you do this?
i knew it was coming

i could have stopped it
you barely touched me 

Your kisses cold
heart lost

The eyes that were once for me 
Now they wander the endless ocean

I wont cry
Eyes so dry

I stop
look up

raise my brows
Wait!

why am i doing this?
YOU COME PICK UP MY HEART!

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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I don't know about the last line. Someone who torn you up. Would need great distance. A strong poem. With each added line made the story more sad and real. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


it's always difficult to find all the pieces once a heart shatters.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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great title..sometimes you have to take a stand in life and love..well said

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Misty Blue Eyes

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