you pick it up

I'm standing here

picking up my heart

THE ONE YOU SHATTERED

with the ax of ice and hate

My heart lays there, 

so many pieces

piece by piece 

it goes into a jar

Why did i let you do this?

i knew it was coming

i could have stopped it

you barely touched me 

Your kisses cold

heart lost

The eyes that were once for me 

Now they wander the endless ocean

I wont cry

Eyes so dry

I stop

look up

raise my brows

Wait!

why am i doing this?

YOU COME PICK UP MY HEART!

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job, well done.

[Lauren Beth]

Crushing poem...to have such a broken heart...I unfortunately know how it feels. I feel a connection with this piece, like I could have written these words..not so long ago. And I just love the end, awesome!

[Dark Empress]

Very realistically written, great emotion. Good write

[Sugar Plum ♥]

It`s so real and provoking emotions, memories, sadness...

[Aven]

there is no way to shield oneself from heartbreak idd...

[Kate Hunter]

haha Very comical writing, and yet very serious at the same time. THAT takes skill!

[HopelesslyDevoted]

wow, this reminds me of my moms marriage to my dad. sounds almost exactly like what he did to her. yes! you tell him! love the ending! its comical yet strong! YOU PICK IT UP! LOL!! love it!

[Marty]

yup, tell him girl! ;)

[MuSe Ampoule]

Greatly visual.
You made this mess! You clean it up!!!!
Very good!!!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

like it..wow very good..

~SK