DONE!

I am done!

The lies stop here

Walk away now!

Don't open your mouth

You can't touch my heart!

razors slice you open

The memories float away!

down the rough and rocky river

I am numb!

feeling Nothing

Walking this place dazed!

a fog over me leading me away

Turning my back on you

i can do better

Flee from here!

don't turn back

I have the world in my hands!

you have nothing but sand

Slipping away you are gone

pressing on i am strong

I am done!

heres the gun

for i have won

Reviews

[Rory CJ Frankson]

******************************************************************* All Stars Misty ****************

Holy... I rather like this one you! The imagery is brutally cool and cuts to the bone [ I have the world in my hands! --- you have nothing but sand ], this is a very cool line. In the turn around.

I love the ending...

I am done!
heres the gun!!!!

Well the review is done, an you got the gun... please, just don't shoot me.

****************************************************************Flee from here! Ro run.*********
Write On / Right On! Romon in Review ... Slipping away, I'm done ...

[Marty]

i love the ending here is the gun, for i have won! how many times i would have loved to say that ! ;) great job

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

this is one of my favorite poem of you i really like it..

~SK

[Coyote Poetry]

No weak words in this poem. Just good direction for someone to get out of your life as soon as possible. Just lines made powerful statements. A outstanding poem. Thank you.
Coyote

[Wondering Mind]

hence the Canadian Firearm Act of 1995.
I can feel the angry violence in this one.