You told me

You told me

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

You told me you wanted me
wanted to hold me
had to kiss me
f**k that
Don't try

You told me you had our future planned
That you wanted a family with me
You lied, told me it wasn't you
f**k that man
Don't try

you told me you would come back
help me find my way
How much you loved me
F**k that
Don't try

You told me you would be there
holding my hand as we walked down the path
you're such a joker i should have known
you would have said
F**k that shes not worth it
Don't try it for shes worthless

You told me i deserved it
Staying alone in life
Never feeling again
F**k you
Don't try it I screamed 

Gun to my head
The tears i wept
Gone now that i see
I told you!!!

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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great job well done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I find this on similar lines to your novel. Well Done !!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Amazing, very good one. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow! O.o nice!

Posted 14 Years Ago


broken promises of love tear at the heart and make great inspiration for writing! great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


when we went with writing, it becomes the best work! you go girl! ;)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the emotion of this poem it flows well very nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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venting..with a raw ending..

Posted 14 Years Ago


ouch, not the ending one would enjoy...but raw.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow. A powerful and angry poem. People who tell lies for self gain leave us pissed off. No weakness in this poem. Direct to the point. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Misty Blue Eyes
Misty Blue Eyes

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