Random poem

Shut the lights off...

If you dare

Shut the lights off...

If you want a scare

Shuts the lights off....

float in the air

Shut the lights off....

leaving you bare

 

Shut the lights off....

if you want to feel torn

shut the ligths off...

watch the thorns

shut the lights off...

do not conform

 

leave the lights on....

Reviews

[Dark Empress]

I like this. It's simple yet very good.

[Sugar Plum ♥]

very good piece...and style :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

ooooooh! this is very creepy! you should enter this in one of the holloween poetry contest! its eery but elusive as well. nothing something you can put your finger on to pin point what you scares you about it. but its scary none the less. awesome!

[MuSe Ampoule]

dark and savory!

[Dream Weaver]

Eerily dazzling...

[Marty]

i love scary movies, and i love this poem! ;)

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

This has a bit scary tone to it. i like it.

~SK

[Coyote Poetry]

Turning the light off. Never worried me. Few bad things can roam in the dark. Darkness can be cover and if in the wrong place. A opportunity to be found by the fear of the night. A very interesting poem. Remind me of a beginning of a scary story book. A excellent poem.
Coyote