little white pills

The pills sit; 8 of them

Small white pills

She sits on the bed

Knowing these pills kill

4 small white pills

Laying on the table

She's not able

The will not to is gone

Placing them in her mouth

Laying on her bed dieing before dawn

 

 

 

Reviews

[Mauricio Montoya]

short, to the point, well done.

[Dark Empress]

short but you get your point across. I like it. very well done

[Sugar Plum ♥]

OH, even so little, but very strong words and cutting like edge...
So good!

[Tate Morgan]

very well doned

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

even though this poem is short it is really good.

~SK

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sometimes the short and raw poems speak volumes..this is one of those..there is a story behind this that doesn't need to be told..

[HopelesslyDevoted]

its amazing, how a short poem can say so much in such a small amount of space. so little words. good choice of them though, they made it powerful. i hope you never consider doing this. there are too many lives worth gold that were destroyed by this method. interesting poem though...

[nono]

Yup, sure do. lol It sucks awesome write strong write. She didn't take them in time? Is what I got out of it. But I love it keep it up!

[Wondering Mind]

some pills more fatal than others

[MuSe Ampoule]

Oooh, great job. Short and eerie!