YOU CAN'T TAME HER

 

She's a strong one

Links in the chain bend and pull

Tugging at her bounds

Screaming out into the little light 

Laughter fills the room

Faces hidden from her she pulls again

Hearing a link let loose

She's a strong one

She wont be tied down

Not broken 

Cant hold her down

She's a strong one

She'll pull and tug at her binds

One by one they will break

Slowly snapping loose 

She's a strong one

They all flee

Evilness in her eyes

One stands alone

Stepping forward she smells him

The fear is there, rising off his body

She's not scared, or frightened 

She can't be broken or tamed

Letting alone with fear she passes

Up the stairs of the castle and out into the night air

She's free, free at last 

Lets out a screeching howl

Flying into the night sky 

Reviews

[~BlueSkyy~]

Nice :)

[Sugar Plum ♥]

Very strong, and clear portrait of animal-woman, makes me dream vampires :)

[Coyote Poetry]

Somethings in life. Don't need to be tamed. My friend had a wolf. He thought he was tamed. One day he killed the other animals in the house and went back to the woods. Some wild beast need to run free without knowing the prison of a gate. I like this woman in this poem. Nothing as beautiful and sexy as a wild and free spirit. A outstanding poem.
Coyote

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i think everyone has this inside them. most of us have just learned to hide that side of our personalities because society tells us its not good to be so strong willed and confident. still society can't tame what is inside us, they can only suppress it. its our job to unlock this strong beautiful person inside and find the key to our strength.

[Wondering Mind]

very vivid and solid write. She sounds scary.

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I feel I know her...

[MuSe Ampoule]

Oooh, very nice! Sounds like a Succubi or the sort! Great descriptions, very vivid!
I loved reading it! Makes me wonder...what prey is she after. One more poem please! :)