YOU CAN'T TAME HER

 

She's a strong one

Links in the chain bend and pull

Tugging at her bounds

Screaming out into the little light 

Laughter fills the room

Faces hidden from her she pulls again

Hearing a link let loose

She's a strong one

She wont be tied down

Not broken 

Cant hold her down

She's a strong one

She'll pull and tug at her binds

One by one they will break

Slowly snapping loose 

She's a strong one

They all flee

Evilness in her eyes

One stands alone

Stepping forward she smells him

The fear is there, rising off his body

She's not scared, or frightened 

She can't be broken or tamed

Letting alone with fear she passes

Up the stairs of the castle and out into the night air

She's free, free at last 

Lets out a screeching howl

Flying into the night sky 

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Haha I love the cockiness towards the end. It has a good message within, be strong for yourself, good write.

[silver threaded queen]

there is always something stronger than you out there. I think she is just a little to cocky when it comes to the fact no one can tame her. good write.

[Mauricio Montoya]

great job.

[The Cute 1]

love it

[Aven]

but I sure will try! hehe, very strong poem. :)

[Dark Empress]

She's scary. I think I might run if I see her lol. Great write. :)

[Tina Kline]

I really like this, like the story line in this. It creates a powerful visual. Too bad we all can't break the bonds that bind us. Fantastic write!

[Tate Morgan]

She scares me

[Marty]

i like it!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

nothing much to say but good job..

~SK