Black Wings

Black Wings

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes























Never had she seen such beauty 
He was perfect!
His bare tan skin
Each ab carved out one by one

His black wings in full plume!
Standing on the ledge ready for flight
He turns back, looking behind him
Smiling at her

He reaches out for her hand
She steps forward with a shaky body
Unsure of what shes seeing
She takes a few steps, accepting his hand

He picks her up into his arms
Long black hair flowing freely against his back
His black wings flutter
His eyes covered by a mist

Lifting up into the Night sky
Strong, sculpted arms holding onto her
She traces his jawline smiling at him
In love the both fell

Love has no boundries
It is blinded at best
Angels and humans

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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Interesting story line with very clear descriptions.
I remember somewhere, some time, reading that love is not blind, it sees more, not less..I think it was Rabbi Julius Gordon. I'll have to check..The end of your write made me want to revisit that.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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a mystical feel...reminds me of city of angels..this is really vivid in it's desciption ..

Posted 14 Years Ago


A interesting poem. A angel with black wings could cause trouble. I like the description and story. The world would more interesting if there were real angels to assist this world. I like the last lines. A excellent poem.
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Posted 14 Years Ago



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Misty Blue Eyes
Misty Blue Eyes

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