Drum and Bass

Drum and Bass

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

She sits with a smirk on her face
Tappin' her pen on the table
Moving her head slightly
Headphones over her ears
Loud beats drum into her holes

Cars honk horns 
People on phones talk
She sits smiling to her self
Loving the beat as she sits
Sipping her hot apple spice

Waiters and waitress come with orders and take back empty plates
People chat, mouths move but she can't hear
Her volume is up as it echos out 
Pen to paper she writes
Smiling at a cute guy near by

looking away her music ends
She pays for her drink and leaves a tip
Another song starts
She gives the guy a nod good bye and walks out the door
The sun shines on her face, followed by buildings shadows

Nodding her head again to the beat and drums on her headphones 
The guy follows and taps her on the shoulder
Turning around 
She smiles and kisses him.

hand in hand they walk together down the long street of trees
Listening to and nodding their heads to the drums and bass....

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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cute...this is so good nice..

~SK

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw, this is such a cute story! Simple and innocent! I love it. As usual your stanzas are sharp and brilliantly written! Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


this is so cool! i love it! it kind of reminds me of some of the times i have just sat in the a restaurant in a busy city, listening to music, and waiting for inspiration to come through into writing! this poem makes me want to tap my feet to the beat while just reading it. the poem makes others more aware of their own beat in their heads. awesome!

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow, an incredible poem... the music and the sense of having a great day really saturates your words... just incredible. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


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lost in music...loved the idea of the world continuing around you as your immersed in the beat..

Posted 14 Years Ago


A beautiful poem. You create a very good scene and situation. Best invention were the head phones. Allow you to listen to what you desire in the circus of life. A very good ending to a outstanding poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


My new favourite poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice write I enjoyed the little story.
I like the end when the guy and girl walk
Away jamming to music. "Music lovers coming together"
That's a little clever write :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I love this :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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