Was Never to be (prequal to He and SHE!)

It was forbidden, their love

Sneaking away into the night

He was sent to destroy

She was sent to love

Their eyes locked never moving

Smiling and laughing

The world was bright

The world was theirs to have and hold

Nothing could part them

Days were endless

Nights gone too fast

Gardens bloomed year round

One day he did not come, 

for a letter was sent instead.

Laid upon her pillow she wept

They had been found

Darkened days and never ending rain

The sun no longer shined 

Flowers ripped from their being

She didn't want to live

He Would never give up, 

Coming after her was all he wanted to do

Free her from the chains of darkness

Could he make it?

Reviews

[Aven]

I loved the prequel as much as the HE and the SHE. amazing how much you get from one idea. :)

[Graceful]

YES YES HE CAN! hahaha. jk I loved the poem very well written. Great job!

[Marty]

very good writing. i love the style!

[Wondering Mind]

If I remember the story well, only the tale made it. They both finally met in their death...Sad, very sad.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

interesting story, i like how you are able to tell that story in a series of poems. i like how you left it as a cliff hanger.

[deeps]

I liked this write. Deep and well written. Love the emotions protrayed.