Was Never to be (prequal to He and SHE!)

It was forbidden, their love

Sneaking away into the night

He was sent to destroy

She was sent to love

Their eyes locked never moving

Smiling and laughing

The world was bright

The world was theirs to have and hold

Nothing could part them

Days were endless

Nights gone too fast

Gardens bloomed year round

One day he did not come, 

for a letter was sent instead.

Laid upon her pillow she wept

They had been found

Darkened days and never ending rain

The sun no longer shined 

Flowers ripped from their being

She didn't want to live

He Would never give up, 

Coming after her was all he wanted to do

Free her from the chains of darkness

Could he make it?

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is so cute! Very sad, yes, but it's still really good and cute the level of devotion these two have for eachother. Great work!

[Vanessa Rico]

AHHH! I loved this! Their love is so intense and pure that it makes my heart weep in joy! Beautiful

[Mauricio Montoya]

the love lives on, awesome.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Awesome and a perfect complement to He and She!

[Coyote Poetry]

A sad and powerful poem. Waiting can be hell. I like the twist of the two falling together. Your description create a sad vision of dreams lost and trying to be collected them again. A excellent poem. Thank you.

[Wolf]

awsome

[.]

ah..the plot thickens..is it a series of poems or will it grow into a book?

[Nadi]

Intriguing, I am interested to see how this will all play out. Great language used in this by the way!

[Dark Empress]

Good poem :) I like it

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

This is really good love it..

~SK