HE! (goes with the poem SHE!)

HE

Crawls from the depths of his own hell

thinking of her smiling face

Walks along streets

Darkness follows

Wishes he could touch her

but is shackled 

Cries out into the night 

listening for her

Wants to save her

taking her away 

Has to know shes going to be ok

watching from the hole

Only sheds tears for her

black slow tears at every punch she gets

Yanks on his chains

only to dig deeper into his skin

Cries out 

kneeling to his pain

Closes his eyes 

and tells her to be strong

Sits in his cage

bound to this hell

Will be there soon

breaking loose at noon

Breaks the chains

ones that bound him to this world

Flies away

spreading his wings 

Comes upon a body 

so limp and cold

picks her up 

crying out into the piercing sun

Was too late!

she was never that strong

Picks her up 

flying to the highest mountain

Watching the sun set together

he falls to ground, hoping for death but is doomed 

Is an angel 

to live forever with out her

Reviews

[Grace Catherine C.]

Lovely, tragic but lovely.

[Nobody.]

now THIS is beautiful poetry. love the somber tone.

[Dark Empress]

Sad but very beautifully written :)

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

So sad but it was good.. nice job in showing your feelings...

~SK

[Aven]

this is so sad and beautiful... well written!

[RTB]

i have not read 'she' but this was a great poem and baseing off of the way this one went i should definitly read 'she'

[.]

this is as good as She..if not better..the imagery you create and the depth of emotion is beautiful..I especially like that its simply written..nothing overtly fancy..but it has a powerful emotional tug on the heart strings..well done!!