HE! (goes with the poem SHE!)

HE

Crawls from the depths of his own hell

thinking of her smiling face

Walks along streets

Darkness follows

Wishes he could touch her

but is shackled 

Cries out into the night 

listening for her

Wants to save her

taking her away 

Has to know shes going to be ok

watching from the hole

Only sheds tears for her

black slow tears at every punch she gets

Yanks on his chains

only to dig deeper into his skin

Cries out 

kneeling to his pain

Closes his eyes 

and tells her to be strong

Sits in his cage

bound to this hell

Will be there soon

breaking loose at noon

Breaks the chains

ones that bound him to this world

Flies away

spreading his wings 

Comes upon a body 

so limp and cold

picks her up 

crying out into the piercing sun

Was too late!

she was never that strong

Picks her up 

flying to the highest mountain

Watching the sun set together

he falls to ground, hoping for death but is doomed 

Is an angel 

to live forever with out her

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Wow, good fit with the other. :) very emotional.

[The Cute 1]

i love this

[Mauricio Montoya]

This is a very sad but touching I like the blend of word you choice to bring this piece together. Excellent write.

[MuSe Ampoule]

Intense and amazing! A wonderful dual piece with Her. Fantastic.

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing poem. Your words create some visions. Easy to lose control. Very hard to gain something that is lost. Complete poem was very good. I like the ending. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Nadi]

The last line really resonates. It really is a tragic story, but they are fantastic poems

[Peter Green]

Okay...so I had the benefit of reading all three at once...in chronological order...for me I see this as the tragedy of love, of companionship, of dreaming of a life with your soul mate. Falling in love so deep...it almost becomes a prison in itself. The only way to break free...is to offer your being...your soul...for eternity...

[Marty]

i was wandering the he whole time what he was since he could fly.
An angel, wonderful! i love fantasy.....

[HopelesslyDevoted]

This made me want to cry! so very tragic and yet beautiful description of an unfortunate event! i love the last line
Is and angel
to live forever with out her

this totally makes the whole poem!

[Matthew Kult]

Tragic. Beautifully written, and well executed. A great companion poem. I am curious about more, before her demise. How did they find each other? How did he get imprisoned? Something that could be expanded on and turn this poem set into a series.

Regards,

Matthew