Is It greener?

I wanted to see what it was like

On my tippy toes i grab hold

Peering over, seeing the in perfections 

The dead spots in your life

The green lush spots of mine

I step back down

Walking away shaking my head

How could it be?

I guess it is greener on my side!

Reviews

[Wondering Mind]

Oh! quite a clever write! I like it.

[deeps]

This is quite the interesting write here i like it

[HopelesslyDevoted]

hmmm.... interesting.... i love that you put a bit of a new perspective on the subject. its something to think about for sure.

[Toon]

epic little masterpeice with some flair! way to turn that truism on its a*s! good job. and don't add more silly its just right.

[Dark Empress]

I like it the way it is but if you feel you need to add more then that's what you should do.