Is It greener?

I wanted to see what it was like

On my tippy toes i grab hold

Peering over, seeing the in perfections 

The dead spots in your life

The green lush spots of mine

I step back down

Walking away shaking my head

How could it be?

I guess it is greener on my side!

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Lol, I love this different view on this. Great work.

[Mauricio Montoya]

They say the grass is greener on the other side. Nice work.

[MuSe Ampoule]

I got an image of a little girl with long hair running down her back, in a white sundress and huge brimmed hat standing on tipy-toes trying to peer over a rickety picket fence.
Very good. You always wonder who's got the greener grass.

[{K}]

Hahaha! I love it! Favorite line:
I guess it is greener on my side!
:D
Great write.

[Dream Weaver]

3rd line 5th word should be (imperfections)
other then that a very good write... ;-)

[Nadi]

Great take on a cliche, short sweet but it really drive the point home. I love it, its a fantastic piece.

[Marty]

defiantly great choice of words! i guess the saying is right! the grass isn't always greener on the other side...

[Nobody.]

Interesting take on the 'grass is greener' maxim. I always say that I'll stick with my nice dead grass...it's easier to maintain. lol! Good stuff.
cheer!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Amazing simply amazing. I like the choice of words you you used in this poem.
"I guess it is greener on my side!"

was an great chose of words.. love it..

~SK

[.]

brilliant use of imagery to bring to life an old saying..very clever and poignant message to boot!