Among The Rubble She Stands

The darkness comes alive

Under the moon's light

Shadows walk the rubble

Broken lives and mending hearts of war

She looks out over the grounds

smiles and whispers "it's going to be ok"

to those shadows, lost and forgotten 

Perched along the ledge

The dark angel smiles

Her little minions reaping the world that was once theirs 

taking souls not quite theirs yet

Sitting in the dark covered rubble

She sits cold and lonely 

hiding from the unknown and the ghosts

Small, fragile, and loving 

Stepping out into the darkness 

Her red gown glows in the night light of the moon

The dark angel calls her minions back, watching 

This little girl so small and pure 

she cannot be touched....

For the black angel stands and cries out into the night air........

Reviews

[Cassiopia Summers]

Very vivid imagery. You provide a great picture full of all kinds of colors. Great work.

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wonderful vivid imagery..

[Color of the Iris]

I've always wanted to walk among a world like that... oh, sorry! Great, great poem! I loved it a lot! Keep writing!

[Nobody.]

Like Toon said, I wanna meet her, too. You've created something powerful.
cheers!

[Dark Empress]

This is one brilliant poem. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. Great write,

[{K}]

Toon, I soo agree! Lol, but seriously, the setting is definitely great:

"The darkness comes alive
Under the moon's light
Shadows walk the rubble
Broken lives and mending hearts of war"

Great line!

[Toon]

i kinda wanna meet this black angel chick!

[MuSe Ampoule]

Great poem, I loved it. The picture works well with it too!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Good poem i really enjoyed it. i can feel the emotion on this nice..

~SK

[HopelesslyDevoted]

such a beauty in darkness... this is very impressive, i like it a lot. i love the picture that you posted with it too, it adds a very nice effect which your writing does as well.