Among The Rubble She Stands

The darkness comes alive

Under the moon's light

Shadows walk the rubble

Broken lives and mending hearts of war

She looks out over the grounds

smiles and whispers "it's going to be ok"

to those shadows, lost and forgotten 

Perched along the ledge

The dark angel smiles

Her little minions reaping the world that was once theirs 

taking souls not quite theirs yet

Sitting in the dark covered rubble

She sits cold and lonely 

hiding from the unknown and the ghosts

Small, fragile, and loving 

Stepping out into the darkness 

Her red gown glows in the night light of the moon

The dark angel calls her minions back, watching 

This little girl so small and pure 

she cannot be touched....

For the black angel stands and cries out into the night air........

Reviews

[Sugar Plum ♥]

lovely, gothic picture of dark fairy tell...Very beautiful!

[Anna]

The girl looks creepy :O The last line felt out of place to me but I liked the poem so sad :(

[Wondering Mind]

Dark, but good imagery in this. Well done

[sarah]

an amazing poem it is a wonderful kind of darkness

[KAREN]

Imagery! Powerful! Darkeness! and very deep! Nice job!

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

another great poem that has a atmospher to it!

[The Cute 1]

dark i love it

[Ruth]

This has a great atmosphere love! Truly so:)
A dark, energy that bleeds through the page (or screen lol)
Awesome
xx

[Marty]

i love the fantasy in this poem! it pulled me in! ;)

[Hollow Man]

this is one of my favs from you...you brought this one to life...great job

KGS