My Head Hurts!!!

The pounding

OH the pounding

IT's in my head!

The ever so loud knocking on my brain

IT wants to stay but i shake my head

"Go away"!

Hurts to close my eyes

Seeping into the cracks and curves 

The blood slowly creeps along, 

The knocking, it wont stop!

Lay my head on a pillow

Close my eyes

Let the daylight subside

Darkness covers my eyes

SLEEP! SLEEP! the headache calls to me

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

yep know how that feels! its awful... good concept for a poem though.

[Nadi]

Ah, the horrible pain of a headache/migraine.
Nice poem, already makes me dread my next headache xD

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

i hate head akes..man iz sorry... I think this poem is ok but it needs to flow a bit more..other than that good job..

~SK

[Coyote Poetry]

I don't like the headaches. You need some cranberry juice or rosemary tea. Help clean up the body and head. Make you feel better. A powerful poem. I hope you feel better.
Coyote

[{K}]

Yeah, I know how this feels. I've suffered three migraines in my lifetime so far, and I'm only eleven. It's not enjoyable. This poem expresses that!

[Aven]

I'm glad I don't suffer from headaches, the frustration leaps off the screen!

[Grace Catherine C.]

Very discriptive, I could practically feel it myself.

[Vanesa Markovic]

As a migraine sufferer since little feet,
I can relate to this in it's most literal form.
Never a fun time, haha.