My Head Hurts!!!

The pounding

OH the pounding

IT's in my head!

The ever so loud knocking on my brain

IT wants to stay but i shake my head

"Go away"!

Hurts to close my eyes

Seeping into the cracks and curves 

The blood slowly creeps along, 

The knocking, it wont stop!

Lay my head on a pillow

Close my eyes

Let the daylight subside

Darkness covers my eyes

SLEEP! SLEEP! the headache calls to me

Reviews

[whiterabbit]

It's funny I read this now, I'm having a terrible headache :(. A poem from someone who understands!

[My Fair Lady]

Oh.. pain. Headaches are terrible.

[YouoweYoupay]

Headaches are aweful.

[Nobody.]

really conveyed the pain here. powerful piece.

[Toon]

i used to know a girl who suffered from migraines. god, was she annoying.

[RTB]

hmm sounds like a migrane lol :) good write about a original but ordinary topic it was cool :)

[Tom]

Been there done that :] Good write.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Sounds like a migraine to me! I hate when I get those and they huuuurt so bad.

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

Mental strength, ignoring the headache.

[Dark Empress]

Nice, good write