My son

Looking out the window

Oh so big you are

Playing on the porch

With those funny toys

 

Oh you are my baby boy

So tall and big

playing so nice

 

Shadow the dog, runs after you

as you scream and hollar

having her catch you if she can.....

 

The sun shines upon your face

Smiling when you smile

The world is at your will

Take it, Use is, Toy with it

Bend and break it!

you make me teary eyed

thinking of how much you have grown...

i love you so much Sean you are my world 

 

Reviews

[Aven]

this is one of the most loving poems I've read on here... you really captured the essence of a mother and child...

"The world is at your will
Take it, Use is, Toy with it
Bend and break it!"

a childlike wisdom saturates this piece, making me smile. :)

[Marty]

you love your son very much! this poem is making me miss mine even more!

[Nadi]

Aw, this is such a beautiful poem! It's so nice that you've written this for your son and im sure when he can understand when he's older he'll love it too.
You're a wonderful mother.

[Cassiopia Summers]

Aw, this is definitely full of love. (:

[Toon]

this is pure... i don't know. i'm not a parent. but i like it. sounds like an awesome kid.

[Matthew Kult]

Beautiful write. My son is my world too. Without him, I am sure to have gone through a psychotic break at this point. It's amazing how children change your life in so many different ways, and it's amazing to watch them grow up.

Regards,

Matthew

[YouoweYoupay]

Pretty much similar to the smile I have on my face as I watch my little three-year-old brother grow and learn, but I guess what a mother feels is much more intense and powerful towards her child. A write tender with emotions. Thanks for sharing.

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

There is no love like a mother's will. Very sincere.

[My Fair Lady]

Gifts of poetry, love through shining mother's eyes.

"The sun shines upon your face
Smiling when you smile
The world is at your will
Take it, Use is, Toy with it
Bend and break it!"

Beautiful at any age. There is nothing quite like the love of a mother for her son.

[Dark Empress]

Aw, how sweet. He is a very loved little boy :)

[RTB]

awe how sweet hes got a good mom :D nice poem very loving