you are an angel i am not

you said you had to go

you could no longer stay

Tears slowly fell down 

not wanting to see you go

why cant i go with?

Your hand on my face

my heart is out of place

please stay 

don't go, what did i do? 

i ask but you say nothing 

as your white wings spread

away you turn 

i catch your hand

make you turn to me

why can't we be?

For you are an angel

and i am not

for to be a human 

it's marked a death sentence 

So away you turn 

telling me to be strong

raise your hands and wings

holding on to myself

i cry out 

as you soar off 

high into the sky

Never to come back.....

For you are an angel 

That is a death sentence 

So stand there and kill me

for i will never want to breath again

with out you i am dead

Reviews

[Tom]

We all need our angels :[ It's sad to watch them go.

[Dream Weaver]

A beautiful enlightenment, Angels and humans a truly
interesting concept that one must wait for the other to
die in order to be together. Nicely done…

[♍ Kirstin ♎]

I really like this piece but I do think it could be improved if you add more puctuation, it'll emphasise parts that need to be and could even make it flow better. Either way it's really good =D

[~BlueSkyy~]

Lovely :)

[Nobody.]

beautiful and powerful write.
cheers!

[Dark Empress]

Beautiful! Very touching. Great write :)

[HopelesslyDevoted]

this really hits close to home for me. almost too close for comfort. i have been through a very similar situation, i felt exactly like that. some people are just too important to lose. nice poem! love it!

[Cassiopia Summers]

This is real great! It was a good story, It reminds me of something... I just can't place my finger on it though. It was a good tale, and powerful at that. Wonderful writing.

[Coyote Poetry]

Few Angels on this Earth. You wrote a interesting tale. When something good disappears from own life. We feel weak and disappointed. The ending was powerful. A very good poem.
Coyote

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Wow i love this it has great feeling in it nice job.

~SK