Fall is here

Red, yellow, brown, green leaves

They twirl and dance in the street in the wind

Coldness fills the air, crisp fresh chills

The skies blue with white puffy clouds, scattered all over

Bright light from the sun gives us warmth

Fall is here can you feel it?

Green grass gone brown with half dead leaves

Curled up like a cocoon 

sounds of leaf blowers making their way down the street

making the leaves fly away

Branches on trees bare, 

limbs move up and down swaying 

naked they feel as they sleep

hibernating for the birth of the new year

fall is here........

Reviews

[Marty]

colorful!

[Nadi]

Really captures the feeling of fall, I love the descriptive colours used, beautiful work.

[Radad Ibn Nasir]

A very seasonal poem, it makes me warm and sleepy.. and at the same time, its getting me ready for new things.. "naked they feel as they sleep" but the cold can never touch them.

[My Fair Lady]

You captured not only the delightful colorful fall, but the cool crispness of it. Nicely done.

[MuSe Ampoule]

I feel it. I lived in New England my whole life and this poem makes me miss the fall color change up there! Vivid colors of changing leaves, swirling and mingling as they fall. I can almost taste the crisp air. Thanks for sharing...great poem!

[Coyote Poetry]

The fall is the best time of the year. The cool nights are great for sleeping and the changing of colors allow us to see the end of a season. A beautiful poem. I like the description in your words. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[{K}]

This feels like Wisconsin-ite writting. That's exactly how our falls here are!

[Aven]

glad you didn't leave out the green. :)

[~BlueSkyy~]

Awesome :)
I really love the fall. I love how you wrote this, it's very well written. :)

[Vanesa Markovic]

Wonderful poem, it paints a glorious picture of my favorite season,
paints it perfectly.
Brilliant :)