He was there

He was there

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

A figure!
A shadow runs across 
My walls filled with darkness and little light
My heart pounds faster
The figure hes here
Behind me
I feel his touch 
My skin crawls and tingles
A shadow in the night
A pain resides in my veins 

He was here i tell you
His figure, shadow fallen against my neck
I feel cold, why am i cold? i reach for the covers, 
only to look down and have none

He was here 
His shadow falls on my bed 
his touch feels real
his eyes are piercing and dead

I close my eyes only to open them 
He is gone, just as he had come he has left
I sit, alone on my bed waiting.....

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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Those monsters that appear in the night. A very good poem. It is amazing how the mind can trick us with strange noises and too many scary movies. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


wow... some horror!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Nice!
I really enjoyed this one.
It's kinda creepy and fun all in the same, good write :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Shades of dark figures that move and twist...
Very interesting concept, could it be a
nightmare or a romantic illusion? Nicely done.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Man that hit my heart i felt the emotion in it good job.. :)

~SK

Posted 14 Years Ago


Wow! That was very good! It made me feel as though you were in a vampire movie... slowly being seduced, and for the fear that you should detect him, he disappears... nice write, keep it coming!

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is powerful i loved it keep it up

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Misty Blue Eyes
Misty Blue Eyes

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