Good Morning

Good Morning

A Poem by Misty Blue Eyes

Sitting up on the bed
Looking out the window
Feeling its cold given off it
I rub my arms trying to get warm

Stepping out of nice warm, dark room 
Yawning from a good nights sleep 
I make my way to the kitchen
The coffee is on and the quiet of the dark, soothing house makes me smile

Cats eating their morning breakfast
Watching outside for what? who knows
The "clink and clack" of the keyboard puts a smile on my face
Oh how nice it feels to have piece of mind.

The little boy emerges from the dark bedroom, 
Stands in front of me rubbing his sleepy eyes
Smiles and says "Good Morning"......

© 2010 Misty Blue Eyes


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cute story!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Again, I just love how realistic it feels. Its as if you are watching through a window, seeing an intimate but routine part of someones life.

Posted 14 Years Ago


My only personal and favorite time of day..the suspended time where I am not in demand...the quiet morning.. me, my thoughts, my coffee, and my keyboard... the most cherished time.

Posted 14 Years Ago


A beautifully created poem love - such detail in your observation :) Makes it real! Awesome
xx

Posted 14 Years Ago


you have the awesome ability to capture the profundity of life's sometimes seemingly mundane events and give them meaning. that's a gift. and you get better at it with each poem. i like it.

Posted 14 Years Ago


The smile of our children will make us happy morning or night. I like your morning. My morning is pretty close to the same. Cats, coffee and feed the kids. A very good poem. Thank you.
Coyote

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very nice.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Adorable! (:

Posted 14 Years Ago


Lovely, awesome, and nice is how I'd describe this. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago



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