Quiet Mornings

No birds sing Yet

Still nestled in their warm bed

Darkness fills the air

It's a quiet morning

"Click" of the thermostat as the heater comes on

Warm air fills the tiny place

Coffee brews in the other room

It's a quiet morning

Lights turn on making the darkness go away

The sun is still asleep for me this morning

The cars go by as the people are off to work!

It's a quiet morning

The children are still sound asleep

Dreaming of candy and fun with uncles

For this morning is mine and its a very quiet morning

Reviews

[Aven]

as already noted, you see something special in all the little things of everyday life... also, I am starting to think that poetry on the subject "morning" is your forteh. I could actually see, hear, smell, taste and feel everything you wrote about... and I especially liked the lines "Still nestled in their warm bed" and ""Click" of the thermostat as the heater comes on"... this is not just poetry, this is magic! :)

[Ruth]

There is a sense of anticipation to this poem, ends nicely and thought provoking, contains a lot of beautiful imagery too xx

[Color of the Iris]

This poem was sweet also, though it was almost the same was the other one "Good Morning"... anyways Good Job!

[♥SunkissAngel♥]

Nice i really enjoyed this read good job.. :)

~SK

[Wolf]

This is perfect now all i need is my own cup of joe keep up the good work i give this one a 100 yet another great write

[Coyote Poetry]

This is what a morning need to be. The smell of fresh coffee always is a pleasure way to awake the body and mind. A very good story. Last lines are very cool also. I have my two grandsons with me at the moment. I do give them their candy and allow them to enjoy their life. A excellent poem. Thank you.
Coyote