Quiet Mornings

No birds sing Yet

Still nestled in their warm bed

Darkness fills the air

It's a quiet morning

"Click" of the thermostat as the heater comes on

Warm air fills the tiny place

Coffee brews in the other room

It's a quiet morning

Lights turn on making the darkness go away

The sun is still asleep for me this morning

The cars go by as the people are off to work!

It's a quiet morning

The children are still sound asleep

Dreaming of candy and fun with uncles

For this morning is mine and its a very quiet morning

Reviews

[Aven]

as already noted, you see something special in all the little things of everyday life... also, I am starting to think that poetry on the subject "morning" is your forteh. I could actually see, hear, smell, taste and feel everything you wrote about... and I especially liked the lines "Still nestled in their warm bed" and ""Click" of the thermostat as the heater comes on"... this is not just poetry, this is magic! :)

[Nadi]

The detalis in the small things are really what make this poem, and the imagery is amazing, it really helps paint a picture.

[Cassiopia Summers]

I would have to agree with My Fair Lady, I do adore your morning poetry. (:

[My Fair Lady]

I love your morning poetry. Clear thoughts, clear imagery, clearly beautiful.

[Toon]

again, you take the little things and make them very special. your poems make it easier to see the trees in the forest. i like it. good job.

[Lauren Beth]

Very enjoyable read...as a mother of two I can definitely appreciate quiet mornings like the one you beautifully describe here. Nice!!

[luciddreamer]

I really enjoyed reading this write...as a mother and grandmother I understand the last line so well...it is a bit of heaven on earth :)
Peace
Robin

[Dark Empress]

Good detail. It's simple yet beautiful and to the point. Great write :)

[Chouazza]

Agree with a previous comment, you've made something really simple and something we take for granted into something really detailed and nice, good poem.

[HopelesslyDevoted]

I love how you turned a simple morning routine ina great writing! :)